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 My name is Daniel Flanagan. I was born in Virginia (but my family didn't stay
 long) and now live in Kansas City, Missouri. My family still lives in the area
 and I have 6 awesome little brothers. Yes, my parents had seven boys and are
-fantastic. I'm married and have a son of my own, who is an absolute *joy*!
-I love my family quite a lot.
+fantastic. I'm married and have two sons of my own, who are absolute *joys*!
 
 I'm a systems engineer/software developer and an elder-in-training for my <a
 href="https://kcrising.church" target="_blank">small church</a> where I help run