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+++ b/readme.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-This post is a Flake-based rewrite of [Learn Nix the Fun Way on fzakaria.com]
-[0]. I really enjoyed the content of the post and wanted to write it as a Nix
-user who is just using flakes. It does add a few extra steps and complexity,
-but I think it's still valuable and perhaps reveals a bit more about Nix and why
-it's pretty fantastic.
+This post is a Flake-based rewrite of [Learn Nix the Fun Way on fzakaria.com][0].
+I really enjoyed the content of the post and wanted to write it as a Nix
+user who is just using and prefers flakes. It does add a few extra steps and
+complexity, but I think it's still valuable and perhaps reveals a bit more about
+Nix and why it's pretty fantastic.
 
 <!--more-->
 
@@ -12,15 +12,15 @@ Let's walk through a single example of a shell script one may write: _what-is-my
 
 ```bash
 #!/usr/bin/env bash
-curl -s http://httpbin.org/get \
-  | jq --raw-output .origin
+curl -s http://httpbin.org/get | \
+  jq --raw-output .origin
 ```
 
 Sure, it's _sort of portable_, if you tell the person running it to have _curl_ and _jq_. What if you relied on a specific version of either though?
 
 Nix **guarantees** portability.
 
-We might leverage _[Nixpkgs' trivial builders](https://ryantm.github.io/nixpkgs/builders/trivial-builders/)_ (specifically, `writeShellScriptBin`) in a basic Nix flake to turn this into a Nix derivation (i.e. build recipe).
+We might leverage _[Nixpkgs' trivial builders](https://ryantm.github.io/nixpkgs/builders/trivial-builders/)_ (specifically, `writeShellScriptBin`) in a basic Nix flake to turn this into a Nix derivation (i.e. build recipe):
 
 ```nix
 # flake.nix
@@ -50,9 +50,13 @@ pkgs.writeShellScriptBin "what-is-my-ip" ''
 
 Here we are pinning our package to dependencies which come from NixOS/Nixpkgs release branch 24.05.
 
-If we `nix build` and `readlink result` we get:
+We can build our package and find out the Nix store path (which contains the
+hash) like so:
 
-  **/nix/store/lr6wlz2652r35rwzc79samg77l6iqmii-what-is-my-ip**
+```console
+$ nix build --print-out-paths
+/nix/store/lr6wlz2652r35rwzc79samg77l6iqmii-what-is-my-ip
+```
 
 And, of course, we can run our built result:
 
@@ -68,7 +72,9 @@ $ nix run
 24.5.113.148
 ```
 
-Now that this is in Nix and we've modeled our dependencies, we can do _fun_ things like generate graph diagrams to view them (click the image to view larger).
+Now that this is in our Nix store, we've naturally modeled our dependencies
+and can do _fun_ things like generate graph diagrams (click the image to view
+larger):
 
 ```console
 $ nix-store --query --graph $(readlink result) | nix shell nixpkgs#graphviz -c dot -Tpng -o what-is-my-ip-deps.png
@@ -76,7 +82,7 @@ $ nix-store --query --graph $(readlink result) | nix shell nixpkgs#graphviz -c d
 
 [![Image of what-is-my-ip dependencies as a graph](./what-is-my-ip-deps.png)](./what-is-my-ip-deps.png)
 
-Let's create a _developer environment_ and bring in our new tool.
+Let's add a _developer environment_ which contains our new tool.
 This is a great way to create developer environments with reproducible tools.
 
 ```diff
@@ -89,7 +95,7 @@ index 2a99357..ab32421 100644
    inputs.nixpkgs.url = "nixpkgs/nixos-24.05";
 -  outputs = {nixpkgs, ...}: let
 +  outputs = {
-+    self,
++    self, # we will need to reference our own outputs to pull in the package we've declared
 +    nixpkgs,
 +    ...
 +  }: let
@@ -97,12 +103,12 @@ index 2a99357..ab32421 100644
      pkgsFor = func: (nixpkgs.lib.genAttrs systems (system: (func (import nixpkgs {inherit system;}))));
    in {
      packages = pkgsFor (pkgs: {
-       what-is-my-ip = pkgs.callPackage ./what-is-my-ip.nix {};
+       default = pkgs.callPackage ./what-is-my-ip.nix {};
      });
 +
 +    devShells = pkgsFor (pkgs: {
 +      default = pkgs.mkShell {
-+        packages = [self.outputs.packages.${pkgs.system}.what-is-my-ip];
++        packages = [self.outputs.packages.${pkgs.system}.default];
 +        shellHook = ''
 +          echo "Hello, Nix!"
 +        '';
@@ -122,7 +128,7 @@ $ which what-is-my-ip
 
 🕵️ Notice that the hash **lr6wlz2652r35rwzc79samg77l6iqmii** is _exactly_ the same which we built earlier.
 
-We can now do binary or source deployments 🚀🛠️📦 since we know the full dependency closure of our tool. We simply copy the necessary _/nix/store_ paths to another machine with Nix installed.
+We can now do binary or source deployments 🚀🛠️📦 since we know the full dependency closure of our tool. We simply copy the necessary `/nix/store` paths to another machine with Nix installed.
 
 ```console
 $ nix copy --to ssh://beefcake $(nix build --print-out-paths)
@@ -130,7 +136,7 @@ $ ssh beefcake /nix/store/lr6wlz2652r35rwzc79samg77l6iqmii-what-is-my-ip/bin/wha
 98.147.178.19
 ```
 
-Maybe though you are stuck with Kubernetes or Docker. Let's use Nix to create an OCI-compatible image.
+Maybe though you are stuck with Kubernetes or Docker. Let's use Nix to create an OCI-compatible image with our tool:
 
 ```diff
 diff --git a/flake.nix b/flake.nix
@@ -155,13 +161,13 @@ index 99d6d52..81e98c9 100644
 ```console
 $ docker load < $(nix build .#docker-image --print-out-paths)
 Loaded image: what-is-my-ip-docker:c9g6x30invdq1bjfah3w1aw5w52vkdfn
-$ docker run -it what-is-my-ip-docker:c9g6x30invdq1bjfah3w1aw5w52vkdfn
+$ docker run -it what-is-my-ip-container:c9g6x30invdq1bjfah3w1aw5w52vkdfn
 24.5.113.148
 ```
 
 Cool! Nix + Docker integration perfectly. The image produced has only the files exactly necessary to run the tool provided, effectively **distroless**. You may also note that if you are following along, your image digest is exactly the same. **Reproducibility!**
 
-Finally, let's take the last step and create a reproducible operating system using NixOS to contain only the programs we want.
+Finally, let's take the last step and create a reproducible operating system using NixOS to contain only the programs we want:
 
 ```diff
 diff --git a/flake.nix b/flake.nix
@@ -198,6 +204,8 @@ index 99d6d52..81e98c9 100644
  }
 ```
 
+Now we can run this NixOS configuration as a reproducible virtual machine:
+
 ```console
 $ nixos-rebuild build-vm --flake .#default
 $ ./result/bin/run-nixos-vm
@@ -217,6 +225,40 @@ $ what-is-my-ip
 
 We took a relatively simple script through a variety of applications in the Nix ecosystem: build recipe, shell, docker image, and finally NixOS VM.
 
+One of the super neat part about flakes is that anywhere you find a flake, you
+can make use of it. Try it out now!
+
+> Note: The following obviously runs code from the internet. Be wary of doing this in general.
+
+```console
+# run a flake's package
+$ nix run git+https://git.lyte.dev/lytedev/learn-flakes-the-fun-way
+24.5.113.148
+
+# enter a flake's development environment
+$ nix develop git+https://git.lyte.dev/lytedev/learn-flakes-the-fun-way -c $SHELL
+Hello, Nix!
+$ what-is-my-ip
+24.5.113.148
+
+# load a flake's docker image and run it
+$ docker load < $(nix build git+https://git.lyte.dev/lytedev/learn-flakes-the-fun-way#container --print-out-paths)
+Loaded image: what-is-my-ip-container:wg0z43v4sc1qhq7rsqg02w80vsfk9dl0
+$ docker run -it what-is-my-ip-container:c9g6x30invdq1bjfah3w1aw5w52vkdfn
+
+# run a flake's NixOS configuration as a virtual machine
+$ nixos-rebuild build-vm --flake git+https://git.lyte.dev/lytedev/learn-flakes-the-fun-way#default
+Done.  The virtual machine can be started by running /nix/store/xswwdly9m5bwhcz9ajd6km5hx9vdmfzw-nixos-vm/bin/run-nixos-vm
+$ /nix/store/xswwdly9m5bwhcz9ajd6km5hx9vdmfzw-nixos-vm/bin/run-nixos-vm
+
+# like running a pre-configured version of my workstation's NixOS configuration
+# NOTE: this will probably take a good, long time to build and lots of bandwidth
+$ nixos-rebuild build-vm --flake git+https://git.lyte.dev/lytedev/nix#dragon
+Done.  The virtual machine can be started by running /nix/store/abc-nixos-vm/bin/run-nixos-vm
+$ /nix/store/abc-nixos-vm/bin/run-nixos-vm
+
+```
+
 Hopefully, seeing the _fun things_ you can do with Nix might inspire you to push through the hard parts.
 
 There is a golden pot 💰 at the end of this rainbow 🌈 awaiting you.